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Does Collecting Make You Feel Dirty?
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Blur
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frostedfuckhead From: frostedfuckhead Date: March 25th, 2005 12:15 am (UTC) (LINK TO SPECIFIC ENTRY)

nice 1

i like it charlie. i think everyone who calls themselves a writer has to write a few of these in their time. giving birth to an idea with words is as daunting a task as any i've encountered... ever. it is certainly worthy of words itself.

the word 'blur' triggered a memory of one of my favorite lines in poetry:

Larkin, speaking of death in "Aubade"

And so it stays just on the edge of vision,
A small unfocused blur, a standing chill
That slows each impulse down to indecision.

mmm. tasty.

Are you ready for the big games tonight? I can't fucking wait man!

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