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Does Collecting Make You Feel Dirty?
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Inside, Outside, Upside Down
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kolakoski From: kolakoski Date: May 25th, 2006 06:14 pm (UTC) (LINK TO SPECIFIC ENTRY)
What a great documentary exercise--going through old computer files.

My favorite line of the poem: "me, this parody of an edge." It's wonderfully allusive.
cbertsch From: cbertsch Date: May 25th, 2006 06:35 pm (UTC) (LINK TO SPECIFIC ENTRY)
I don't remember my thought process in writing it, which isn't suprising since I'd repressed the entire poem. But I do like it when poets use line breaks to create double-meanings. Take that line with the one that precedes it and I bet most readers wiould think that "this parody of an edge" is distinct from "me." By itself, though, the line suggests otherwise. Thanks for commenting!
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