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Does Collecting Make You Feel Dirty?
cbertsch
cbertsch
Counterfactual Description
In my dream, the tips
of the basil's leaves went black;
the frost was months off.

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From: bobo_amargo Date: October 27th, 2006 02:27 pm (UTC) (LINK TO SPECIFIC ENTRY)

Optative

Where I keep my tips
(in the jar marked "Dried Basil"),
less chill futures dream.
cbertsch From: cbertsch Date: October 27th, 2006 02:37 pm (UTC) (LINK TO SPECIFIC ENTRY)

Re: Optative

Ooh, that makes me so happy! I want to reply in kind, but am too busy today to rise to the occasion. It will have to wait until next week.
From: bobo_amargo Date: October 27th, 2006 06:53 pm (UTC) (LINK TO SPECIFIC ENTRY)

Optative x Two

I have a couple of promissory notes from you: looking forward.
cbertsch From: cbertsch Date: October 27th, 2006 08:40 pm (UTC) (LINK TO SPECIFIC ENTRY)

Re: Optative x Two

Call me debtor, call me doctor, just don't call me dim.
From: bobo_amargo Date: October 30th, 2006 06:18 pm (UTC) (LINK TO SPECIFIC ENTRY)

Midnight Toker?

I think when two promissory notes become three, that's the threshold at which you become infantilized or a "Cat's in the Cradle" shadow child. Take me to Disneyland . . . ?
xxxpunkxgrrlxxx From: xxxpunkxgrrlxxx Date: October 28th, 2006 11:03 am (UTC) (LINK TO SPECIFIC ENTRY)
haiku isn't my favorite by any means, but i like this.
cbertsch From: cbertsch Date: October 28th, 2006 11:49 pm (UTC) (LINK TO SPECIFIC ENTRY)
Thanks. I've been liking the form lately. The 5-7-5 thing is stupid and not even a Japanese invention, as far as I can tell, but I did it anyway in this case. Really, I'm just into extremely short poetry right now.
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