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In The Lusty Month of May - De File
Does Collecting Make You Feel Dirty?
cbertsch
cbertsch
In The Lusty Month of May
No longer in a relationship
with the meaning of is,
baby. Tragedy is always
a bait and switch. Updated,

anticipated. My profile
hides my lazy I while
yours mixes metaphors
under London Bridge.

Which? Boys are dying
for the tingle of salt
on their tongues. You
heard me right. The

word wasn't what it was
when I circled the windy
lake, sand hilling up
like a documentary
about the Dust Bowl.

Face the music, darling,
you're an open book
when the flame turns
your thin milk to bone.

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elf_owl From: elf_owl Date: May 5th, 2008 02:58 am (UTC) (LINK TO SPECIFIC ENTRY)
Beautiful.
cbertsch From: cbertsch Date: May 5th, 2008 03:05 am (UTC) (LINK TO SPECIFIC ENTRY)
Danke sehr!
quuf From: quuf Date: May 5th, 2008 03:22 am (UTC) (LINK TO SPECIFIC ENTRY)
I want that last quatrain tattooed on my forehead.
cbertsch From: cbertsch Date: May 5th, 2008 03:32 am (UTC) (LINK TO SPECIFIC ENTRY)
!!!
cbertsch From: cbertsch Date: May 5th, 2008 03:36 am (UTC) (LINK TO SPECIFIC ENTRY)
I mean, I am too pleased with your comment to say anything other than, "!!!"
quuf From: quuf Date: May 5th, 2008 03:43 am (UTC) (LINK TO SPECIFIC ENTRY)
I truly love it—I even love how it feels on my lips and palette as I whisper it—but in the interest of moderation, I'm willing to consider a less conspicuous body part.
cbertsch From: cbertsch Date: May 5th, 2008 11:38 am (UTC) (LINK TO SPECIFIC ENTRY)
Well, that makes me very happy. I like it too, more than I usually like what I've done. I think it's because I let myself be possessed by voices in my head that were not identifiably my own.
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